Thursday, February 21, 2013

20 February 2013


Assignment for 27 February

For Tuesday, write what we will call an “American Sonnet” – a 14 line poem with lines of 10 syllables.  These lines do not need to follow a rhyme scheme; but if any of the 14 line-ending words do rhyme, all the lines need to follow a rhyme scheme.  That is, rhymes should be intentional if you choose to use them, not random. The poem should have two stanzas: the first stanza should consist of 8 lines and the second should consist of 6 lines.  Line 9 needs to begin with a shift away from the direction of the first stanza. In other words, we will think of line 9 as the “but” line.

Variations on this basic pattern, which is already a variation on stricter traditional sonnet forms, are permitted within reason. The issue is intention rather than randomness.  We are not engaged in the organic determination of form that characterizes “free” verse. Rather, we are attempting to work within a formal structure right from the very beginning.

Suggestion: You may well want to pick your subject before you head into the writing of your sonnet in order to “orchestrate” the subject with regard to the turn or “but” in line 9.
Examples of sonnets from our text include:

Billy Collins          77 & 43
Bill Shakes           274-79
E.B.Browning     47
P.B.Shelley         280
Bill Words            357
John Donne        100
Bob Frost             130-131
Bob Hayden       147
Gerry Man Hop 161-162
John Keats          179-180 & 182
Claude McKay   222
Edna St. Vincdent  Millay              223-224
John Milton        225
Sir Philip S            285
Eddie Spenser   288
Sir Tom Wyatt    361
W.B.Yeats           370

Then to round out the alphabet we have this by J. A. Zoller from Living on the Flood Plain

Standing Water

Where water lies on low ground, grass dies.
Its smooth surface, that mirrored sky, slowly clouds.
Water striders haunt its face, mosquito larvae
hang mysteriously below the blue reflection,
a mud turned-dirt-ring trails its slow recession.
Where water finds rest, decay begins.

Who is to say the life that attends its dying –
Frogs, mosquitos, water bugs, algae, mud life –
is  less necessary, less worthy, less living?

Are we to say one but not the other?
– the falling, streaming, soaking, filling but not
the wandering, eroding, this hanging around?

And do we not judge, as it drives us away,
that earthy, once welcoming air turned stink?


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